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    HOOD RIDAH empressRuth's Avatar empressRuth is offline
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    Post callin all poets...

    are there any poetically justified imix members??? if so, drop allyuh hottest line mek me see

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    Old School Member Panman06's Avatar Panman06 is offline
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    eh heh??

    I nearly missed this one completely. Here's something short which I wrote a while back. I don't even think I finished it.




    As I lay there waiting, wanting her genuine "wining" sensation,
    I feel myself beginning to grow.
    But I'm realizing that I'm not to grow alone, in a lonely place,
    by myself..... for myself.
    So as she enters the temple, she wastes no time and begins to "wine"...
    That fine genuine way which makes me grow....
    which in turn makes her juices flow.
    I begin to LICK, BITE, TUG, and CARESS.....
    those areas only I know best.
    Scratching, dripping, screaming and moaning,
    "Damn"!!!....how dread seeing tomorrow morning.

    All of a sudden, awake and able to see,
    I stopped, then realized she is no longer with me.
    ©2003

    I wonder what mood I was in when I wrote this one.
    Last edited by Panman06; 07-29-2003 at 06:22 PM.

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    My definition of writing is to release without fighting
    To conversate about things that are happening
    My definition of poetry is what flows through me
    Something in deed to look back and read

    Happiness is something that comes in time
    Hurt is something that sneaks of behind
    Be you and do what you have to
    “cause I know my definition, all I have to do is finish my mission

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    MLO, CTA 4 LIFE Kamasutra's Avatar Kamasutra is offline
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    i am in a Loop
    just following the Group
    Damn where is the Pork
    maybe its with Mr black Rock
    Aye forget about the loop, group, and Mr Rock
    I think It's time to FOOP...
    www.VibesFromVenus.com

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    Somewhere b e t w e e n the procrastination.... and the homework.....
    and the incessant forwards..... and the friendships..... and the calls to each other complaining about crushes!!......
    Somewhere b e t w e e n the phone calls to old friends..... and the "I miss you's", the "I love you's"....... and the "What are we doing
    tonight's?".....
    Somewhere b e t w e e n all of the changing,growing...
    Somewhere b e t w e e n the classes........ and the skipping classes......and the studying for tests.......and the pretending to study for tests....... and the downright not studying for tests...
    I forgot...I forgot what life is all about.
    I forgot what it meant to cry.......
    I forgot that pretending to be happy doesn't make you happy........... and that pretending to be smart doesn't make you smart ............
    I forgot that you can't just forget the past in fear of the
    future..........
    I forgot that you can't control falling in love and that you can't make yourself fall in love...........
    I learned that I can love.........
    I learned that it's okay to mess up... and it's okay to ask for help......... and it's okay to feel like crap.........
    I learned it's okay to complain and whine to all your friends for a whole day........
    I learned that sometimes the things you want most you just can't have. I learned that the greatest thing about life isn't the parties or the drinking or the hook-ups...
    It's the friendships, which means taking chances........
    I learned that sometimes the things we want to forget are the things which we most need to talk about..........
    I learned that letters from friends are the most important things. And that sending cards to your friends makes you feel better.
    But, basically, I just learned that my friends...both o l d and
    n e w ......... are the most important people to me in the world.
    And without them without you!, I wouldn't be who I am today.....

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    Ruff Wine on my KITTY I Like It 2 Bad's Avatar I Like It 2 Bad is offline
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    There you are my beautiful butterfly
    With your wings of freedom grazing the sky
    The Joy, the Happiness, the Love you gave me
    Make me want wings to also become free
    Oh how I want to enter your world with such bold
    Soaring over mountains and lakes
    Or even dashing through snow flakes
    Oh sweet butterfly how I wish you could stay
    But the love I have for you, you gave it away
    Please butterfly don't let my fairytale end
    But let this be the beginning of you being my beautiful best friend.

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    Take Kaiso In Yuh Mouth!! lordsalt is offline
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    i call this one..


    'Ode To Beef Roti'

    As i walk up to the store counter
    I wonder, 'Should I eat order a roti or have the flounder?'
    Times are crucial since the line behind me is long
    Yet I just can't seem to stop singing this song
    Oh Beef Roti, Oh Beef Roti
    I love you very much
    You Are My Trophy, You Are My Trophy
    Is this what Rupee was Tempted To Touch?
    Yet I feel dishonored and wrong
    choosing you as my dish,
    when I know all along
    I really want saltfish
    As I run out the restaurant mad and confused
    You are what I should of ordered.....ooo ooo ooo

    Lord Saltfish


    salt

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    Talking thanks...

    to all of you who posted...they're all really nice. and KAMASUTRA, they Pork and Fooping...why?? :p but hey, a poem is a poem is a poem

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    Post here's one of mine...

    i call it "Martini Glass*"

    fill me up another round, barkeep
    i'd rather drown my sorrows
    than let them resurface into my tearducts--burning,
    harder than any liquor on my throat
    stinging harder than the
    needle that branded me
    INVINCIBLE across the heart
    drown those thoughts and feelings
    make them unknown to me again
    like skin untouched by lust
    like skin untouched by passion

    fill me up another round, barkeep
    to wash away memories of
    L O V E, L I F E
    with him
    without him
    undock the ships of memorabilia
    and the bits and pieces of the
    journey i thought i was headed
    for with a one-way ticket

    With this Martini glass, i hope to
    get a hard hit back into reality
    and get over him.

    *Surgeon General's Warning: Martinis may not drown sorrows

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    The Light...

    Imagine life as ah Dark Room
    To afraid to enter
    Posing at the Door
    Fearing whats inside
    Your faith is weaker
    Now you build up Anger
    Asking God why should
    I enter

    Tells you aren't you
    tired of suffering
    Now ah tear
    runs down your face
    And you call for momma

    Theres know answer
    Finally you enter
    You hit your foot
    on ah sofa
    You stop !crying I can't take this know longer
    The reward of life is know
    That the light within you
    Can change ah dark room
    So only you know
    How strong the Light
    Within you can shine
    Life is full dark rooms
    Only you can change it!

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    Old School Member Panman06's Avatar Panman06 is offline
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    Here's one of my favorites: :angel1

    EXOTIC FRUIT SALAD

    As we lay here I say to myself, "I will never leave this zone of island erotica".
    The silhouettes of our dark chocolate figures cast their marks on the white backdrop of the room.
    Penatrating your cranium with verbal stimulation....
    As I lick your breasts which stimulate your labium.
    As I continue to lick around your protuberants....
    your fingernails lacerate my skin.
    As I taste certain places, I feel your juices begin to release.
    My fingers run up and down your spine, in between your thighs.
    I caress the zone where I must thank your mother for giving you.
    I bless your lips, torso, and thigh....
    with sensual and sensitive kisses which enhance the euphoric high.

    I continue this form of foreplay, and I tell you that I'm hungry for your loving.
    At that point you present me with a meal I cannot refuse.
    Presenting this meal has kept you "coming" around for soooo long
    This meal is dressed with grapes, canteloupe slices, cherries, guava and maple syrup.
    As you feed me, I see the expression in your eyes....
    On your face, I see satisfaction and growing sensations of pleasure.

    When I'm finished, you want to offer me more of your exotic fruit salad.
    With a growing urge of hunger within me...
    I must decline the offer.
    For if I enjoy anymore fuit, there will be no more to enjoy.

    So as we lay here, I dream......awaiting the next privilege of tasting your exotic fruit salad.
    ©2003
    Last edited by Panman06; 07-29-2003 at 06:23 PM.

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    MLO, CTA 4 LIFE Kamasutra's Avatar Kamasutra is offline
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    Re: thanks...

    Originally posted by empressRuth
    to all of you who posted...they're all really nice. and KAMASUTRA, they Pork and Fooping...why?? :p but hey, a poem is a poem is a poem
    Ok miss here's a little something i wrote a few years ago...no pork or fooping in this one...

    SEASON CHANGE


    Why do thoughts of you haunt my boundaries
    Ours was one, which was doomed, or was it
    Maybe our moons and stars yearned for an eclipse
    Where was cupid when our hearts cracked
    What happened to our divine intervention
    My soul and heart has been churning since
    Rummaging about the ifs, the ands, the buts and the maybes
    All of which has been a perpetual vortex, but
    Like the seasons change, I will endure the harsh winters
    My seeds will burgeon in the spring, and
    I will be wanton in the summer
    And atone in the fall,
    for If our paths should cross again may It be full of bliss
    www.VibesFromVenus.com

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    HOOD RIDAH empressRuth's Avatar empressRuth is offline
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    Re: Re: thanks...

    [QUOTE]Originally posted by Kamasutra
    [B]Ok miss here's a little something i wrote a few years ago...no pork or fooping in this one...

    thank you KAMASUTRA :angel1

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    Dawtah of the Sun Empressdududahlin's Avatar Empressdududahlin is offline
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    Panman06 Here's one of my favorites: EXOTIC FRUIT SALAD
    BRETHREN HERE ARE SOME SNAPS IN DE AIR FUH DAT!!!!*CLICK CLICK CLICK*

    Woyeee- I think we need to add something else to that fruit salad! Hmmmm? LOL

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    Finally something I can post!

    It's so great to see imixer posting poems. I really luv to read 'em.

    Been doing some thinking, letting things go with a slide.
    I try to abide, but it can’t hide.
    I am respectful, considerate, strong black women.
    That work so hard, not to stress.
    I am beautiful, proud, and loyal.
    Good food in the fridge, don’t let it spoil.
    I can make initial promises from earth to heaven; added just for a mix, a little bit ah blessings.
    Yeah sweetie, I got that way when I can be a pain.
    Just remember its neva’ in vain.
    I can embrace you with the unconditional love that my experiences and feelings can offer.
    Not just break you off, break you of proper.
    I guess what I am trying to say is I tired!
    Tired playing that game of tag, too much involved, been had.
    What I can give to this relationship is hard as concrete.
    Besides, it adds more enthusiasm under the sheets.

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